All Comments on 'Alicia Grows a Pair'

very hard to know what to think of this story. Erotic, but pointless, in a way.

5. Lots of good proverbs and sayings, police lexicon, and undercover secret missions. In the early pages, I often thought of Zootopia and "Miss Detective2" with Sandra Bullock and Michael Caine (a masterpiece).

May I say that the most radiant part is in italic font? Bravo.

Good idea the B-cup. Never go beyond that. Mary's advice is very well written, she is wise and practical. More Lucinda, please?

5. Lots of good proverbs and sayings, police lexicon, and undercover secret missions. In the early pages, I often thought of Zootopia and "Miss Detective2" with Sandra Bullock and Michael Caine (a masterpiece).

May I say that the most radiant part is in italic font? Bravo.

Good idea the B-cup. Never go beyond that. Mary's advice is very well written, she is wise and practical. More Lucinda, please?

Good story!

4

WELL-WRITTEN, BUT UNCLEAR WHAT EXACTLY HER INVESTIGATIONS WERE.....

'Like James Bond' is said at the beginning, Jane Bond rather.

Very well written and not over-explained, a stream of events style that reminds me of movies. Maria and her help. The sex at the end, was that the same guy who had followed Marie after the end-of-course party?

And the memory of her first time, the piecein italics - a jewel.

Following you now. Thanks for writing and publishing this.

Excellent story very intriguing and extremely well written