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I looked at it, almost took it down, was reaching for it when Jenni said, "Tom, that's amazing!"
She stood in the bedroom door, two mugs of steaming cofee on a tray, some small pastries. She walked across, put the tray down then came to stand close. She studied the painting, then the photographs, and I moved away, allowing her space.
"God, Tom, these are incredible. Absolutely incredible."
"You think he'll like them?"
She nodded enthusiastically. "He'll love them."
"Even that one?" I pointed to the last photograph. "I wasn't sure about that one."
"I look like I'm about to cum," Jenni said.
"I know. Too much?"
She shook her head. "I love it. It belongs."
"Greg won't think... won't wonder what might have happened afterwards?"
She glanced around at me. "He knows." It was a statement, matter of fact.
"He doesn't mind?"
"He knows it wasn't serious. God, that sounds awful. You know what I mean."
I smiled. "Yeah, I know."
She grinned. "Fuck. I wish he wasn't coming back just yet. I'm so fucking wet, Tom."
"Save it for Greg."
We took out coffee downstairs and sat in the kitchen, and after twenty minutes the front door opened and Greg came in.
"Tom, my man! How's in hanging?"
"Same as ever," I said.
"Finished?" he asked.
"Upstairs," I said.
"Show me," he said.
"I think Jenni ought to do that."
Greg looked at his wife, almost shyly, and she nodded and slid off the stool. As she passed me she stopped and kissed me on the cheek, then turned my head and kissed me on the mouth. "Thank you, Tom," she whispered.
She led her husband upstairs, and after five minutes I got up and made my way quietly out of the house.
- COMMENTS
Mojo648about 2 years agoBrilliant, but did he get paid, (or was sex the payment)? Lol.
Either way, I'm enjoying the storyline, it's one of those story's that as you read it, you can picture it happening, like your watching it on TV. If this was on DVD, I'd buy it. That's the sign of a good written one.
Well done.
toobyover 3 years agoI haven't commented on any of your stories, but you've been in my Favorites for quite a while. I love this series, and you are very talented at expressing the throws of young love and lust. This chapter was an exquisite exploration of gardening, painting, and losing virginity. If his loving is as passionate as his drawing and landscaping, his cousin Ali is in for a very good time!
silverace1about 6 years agoReally enjoyed. Was not expecting to when you warned that Ali was not involved but w as pleasantly surprised. Now back to chapter four!
Rapier875about 9 years agoChapter 3 is an improvement over chapters 1 and 2. You are a really good story teller!
Yobo36almost 10 years agoIncredible! This is a series I am going to enjoy.......to the MAX. Everyone 5 stars, so far.
Hookmeistralmost 11 years agoI'm truly hooked on your stories. I don't usually read a story that has so many chapters but after having read so many of your other stories how could I NOT read this series? I understand what one person meant about her dislike of Tom now but I have to disagree. I think he actually handled the whole situation quite well given the entire set of circumstances as presented to him by Jenni as well as the subtle way in which Greg 'handed his wife over to Tom'.... This is essentially what Greg did so I, quite frankly, didn't see this as a cuckhold kind of issue and more of a permission type of thing, even if it wasn't explicitly spelled out for him. What's more, Tom didn't take the opportunity given to him to go up to the bedroom to show off his handiwork to Greg but rather, and quite gracefully, suggested it should be Jenni who show it off to Greg instead. He also only stuck around 5 minutes and then realizing they weren't coming back right away, gave them their space. He also alluded to the fact that she needed to save her arousal for her husband. Tom maturely understood the reality of their marriage and the temporary nature of his and Jenni's short relationship. I was actually very happy with how Tom handled himself. I had expected his mother to walk into his bedroom and see the finished painting and was slightly disappointed she didn't get to see it. I had also wanted him to get a picture of the finished portrait to show his sister, Ali at some point. I think she would have wanted to see it. Anyway, thank you so much for your amazing contributions to the Literotica community. You are an impressive writer!!
GingerCat1over 11 years agoDon't get me wrong this was a okay chapter but it kind of made me like Tom quite a bit less than he was so willing to have sex with another mans wife with no real sense of guilt. Kind of makes him look like a arsehole and makes me like him quite a bit less.
Eternal_Midnightover 11 years agoI was apprehensive going into this chapter, not knowing what to expect but by the second page I was hooked. It was such a great story and it could be it's own series easily. Well done friend!
Anonymousabout 13 years agoI'm really glad that you did this series. Your writing reflects an unusual understanding of timing, interplay, sensuality, and sexuality. Thank you for taking your time to please your widespread audience - you have ! And please keep writing! Thanks - A very grateful reader !
knightofheartsover 13 years agoThis was the perfect chapter. Almost like we could read when he stops being a boy and becomes a man; an impressive man at that.
