All Comments on 'All Aflutter Ch. 02'

I like how both this and I think it was 'By Any Other Name' both focused on the more condescending and humiliating side of submission, I love the thought of it being brought in to focus like that when being teased.

Thanks for reading! This was a really fun commission that got drawn out because I flat-out adored the premise!

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Thanks, CSC! I think that's a huge part of the appeal of mind control stories like this. I'm a huge fan of domination being sugary-sweet, loving, full of praise, and as condescendingly, adorably humiliating as can possibly be.

I loved the story! I really appreciate stories that take their time and give a slow burn. The bits of world building are always a treat and I enjoy how you portray monster girls. After reading a couple of your other stories, I really like the lighthearted feel they have given off.

I also liked the food

Sorry, I accidentally sent of my previous comment before finishing it!

As a last random remark, I really liked the food similes you used here. I’m not sure gif you use the same ones in other stories, but they especially fit here with the food theme you have in it. There was an area where the Ásdís questioned where Aura got the eggs for the cake, which I thought would lead to some further backstory about what Aura was doing out there. I was curious about that, and I thought that that could be an opening for future sequels if she get other travelers (this seemed implied at other areas) to support her lifestyle.

Great story!

Goodness I wish that was me, wonderful read!

Loved the story.