All Comments on 'All Expenses Paid Ch. 02'

A very good 2nd chapter, but i think i miss some dialogue. This is unique in that way, and i think misses some emotion as a result. Nevertheless, i look forward to the next chapter.

She had to watch her husband get his rocks off with two women as she was being tortured? A way to gain her cooperation and forget she's married? Or, is this going to ultimately lead her to choose to stay on as the hotel whore when her debt is paid?

this is just some woman hating dude who's written this- quite pathetic!

Definitely has potential... do you intend to return to finish this? Or are you; like so many others; just going to leave us readers wondering?