All Comments on 'All Moxie No Mercy 06'

by RedFireBrand

Sort by:
  • 5 Comments
10Bender10Benderabout 3 years ago

Shameless self promotion. I love it. How much to have you pump my story? Keep up the good work

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

How much creepier can Todd get? All he has to do is kill a couple of small animals and he is almost to serial killer stage, ick! Need more please.

TJSkywindTJSkywindabout 3 years ago

RE 10Bender -- I, too, laughed out loud when I read that Wendy likes reading about Steampunk Harlots.

We have the hostile boys' team coach, the girls have their first League game to play, they are almost all juggling multiple relationships, including some for pay, and there's the mysterious woman fixated on Kimiko. Wendy's relationship with Steph and growing affection for Julie. Lyta's lovers, those of her mother, and their desperate shenanigans to keep their affairs to keep the other from finding out. Julie's determination to keep her new part-time job and thus avoid any casual affairs at work thereby depriving Todd of the pity-fuck he would either have a heart-attack if offered or fall over himself to actually plunder those pink depths. Tryssta, the Ace girl, and Devona the race girl who both actively have pay clients. I have the impression that while Lyta, Kimiko, Wendy, and Julie are as active sexually as the previous two, the latter four hook up because it feels good and for fun. Neither Julie nor Wendy have money problems. Diane, Lyta's mom, on the other hand, seems to have pay clients as a means to support her and her daughter. I'm curious how Todd has thus far evaded being outed as the seller of upskirt and porn videos.

Anyway, thanks for sharing, and glad to hear that you are doing better. 5* Slainté

An interesting alternative future society. Thanks for sharing.

pk2curiouspk2curiousover 2 years ago

Quite the eclectic group of otherworldettes . So completely with their own extreme personalities and adventures . So good .

Brutus69Brutus69almost 2 years ago

Good add for another very good story ;)

Great chapter, delving into the type of technology the setting has while still getting hot and steamy. The conversation between the girls on sexuality is also a nice touch.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous
userRedFireBrand@RedFireBrand
All my submissions are being falsely flagged as AI generated so I have been unable to update anything. Nothing I do seems to fix the issue and even if I rewrote everything, I don't know what to change. Finally finished my first story! Steampunk Harlots weighs in at over 390...

READ MORE OF THIS SERIES