All Under Control Ch. 04

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"Hold on, listen," I repeated.

"I had an amazing plan of the things I was going to do for you. Now you just go and fuck it up."

I held my hands up, placating the rage in my girlfriend's eyes. "It's not what you think."

"I think?" she spat, "Do you know how much I was looking forward to this? Do you have the faintest fucking idea?"

"Mina," I growled, "Just please, listen."

She rocked back on her heels, arms folded tightly over her breasts, the pink sex toy I had been training her with now completely forgotten.

"I said yes because we are getting the run of the place. The luxury suites, the sauna, the pool. All of it," I said, "Just the two of us. After Monday, it's two grand per day just to set foot in the place. We get it all weekend for free."

"But you said I had to go thirty-three days and then I got whatever I wanted," she insisted, snidely.

"I hadn't even decided if I was going to let you get to thirty-three days yet," I snapped back and instantly regretted it.

"Don't," she replied, softer now, "Cam, don't fuck me around."

I dropped to my knees in front of her and kissed her lips.

"I'm not. I wouldn't do that. Look, I'm sorry, I didn't mean that. I'm definitely going to let you reach thirty-three days, no tricks, okay? So you get to have your release. Will you trust me? This is going to be an amazing way to finish the denial. The place is unreal."

Mina's shoulders slumped.

"Of course I trust you," she replied.

I stood up, cupping my hand under her elbow and raising her to her feet too.

"Whatever you were planning, can it be combined?" I asked.

Mina looked like she was about to say something, but she stopped herself.

"I'm sorry I didn't ask you what you had planned," I said, gently.

Mina was searching my face now. I hoped she could see that my contrition was genuine.

"Yeah," she sighed, "I guess I could pull it all together."

"What're you planning?"

"Not telling."

Mina seemed to be settling down now. I hoped that I was bringing her around to the idea of a naked weekend in opulence. She slid the little latex panties off and guided the pink rubber dildo to her pussy lips.

"I guess it'll be okay," Mina conceded at last.

She slid herself onto the rubber cock and began to rock backwards and forwards in slow motion, like I had her do every night.

Feeling the conversation moving back into familiar territory, I added, "Bustier off too," as I returned to chopping the onions.

Mina unhooked her bustier and deposited in on the benchtop. I continued preparing dinner in silence while my naked girlfriend humped her sex toy next to me, building herself back up to the peak of sexual tension, as I had her do every night. I reached out and ran my fingers over her folds, inspecting the two sets of tiny silver studs buried in the soft flesh of her labia. Then I teased back her clitoral hood to reveal the matching silver bar threaded vertically through her clit with shiny silver balls at each end. My fingers touched her hairless mons, detecting the first, faint prickles of regrowth.

"Good," I said, "Coming along well. After your next laser session you'll be ready."

Mina didn't reply. Instead, she continued to thrust herself onto the pink rubber cock until it glistened and dripped with her juices.

I tipped the onions into the pan and began on the mushrooms.

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AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

I love these stories! It’s a brilliant blend of them descending into her being completely submissive to him and under his control, and him getting stricter and more cruel. While also maintaining and making clear they deeply love each other.

So many stories have the guy go full villain and loose all concern for her. And that just ruins the story for me. Those little details like him opening the door for her & making it clear he loves her are what allows me to enjoy the crueler parts of this.

She’s surrendering control of herself over to him because she trusts him and loves him, and trusts he will take good care of her, even if she surrenders completely to him.

Without that love and trust these stories do such a fantastic job at including this genre doesn’t work for me.

cat833942cat833942about 1 year ago

Never knowing how much of what is going on is due to a post hypnotic suggestion is a massive ongoing mind fuck, talk about playing with her head! At the same time, really glad to see that she still has plenty of fire inside of her, that she is not a "broken doll", and that he clearly cares for her deeply, loves and treasures her, even as she is changing under the pressure of all of this.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Extraordinary detail and solid narrative. I love the flow and logic. And the heat.

Babypants126Babypants126about 1 year ago

Extraordinary detail and solid narrative.

notanauthornotanauthorover 1 year ago

Just found your stories - the use of mind control and submission with O denial is terrific. I had beten hoping someone would write something like this!

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