All Comments on 'All Under Control Ch. 07'

Def not the direction I thought this would go. Great writing! 4/5!

This role reversal stuff seems to make it in to any M/f story these days.

It really doesn't add much, and it makes it hard to understand the previously stated preferences of the characters.

It's ok to just be D or s.

Great story!! I just wanted to say, one chapter... Their is so much potential in this story. Mina can become Bree, his sex obsessed Bimbo. More piercings, tattoos and plastic surgery. His cam whore ;)

Love the twist, the role reversal—then ends with another twist. Nicely done. Enjoying this story!

This is such a fun and entertaining story. Great story telling and wonderful characters that bring this adventure to life. So well done. Love the turns and twists and they events they get into. Just darn good, Thanks for publishing. Cheers

I’m getting a little lost here and that’s spoiling this story for me. Denial is about making future orgasms better or stronger. Hope the finish is enlightening.

Fantastic … every chapter brought another ton of creative surprises … intense and thrilling writing. Only downer that all good things end sometime …. Am curious what the final chapter looks like.

2 stars. Hate the role reversal stuff & the dominatrix club owner. But the ending was good.