All Comments on 'All We've Known is Love Ch. 01'

It was sometimes difficult to figure out who was who

You need an editor. Good writing is minimizing, not maximizing. write "siblings" every now and then if it saves a few syllables. But saying "sibling" when you could just say "sister" is a shame when you've already used it fifteen times.

I'll take "brother and sister" over "the siblings" any time, even if it's a little longer.

As to content, I like it very much, it's hot as hell. A bit strange maybe, but erotic.