All Comments on 'Ally's Sex Shop Dare'

by TriangleToast

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KitPiscesKitPisces8 months ago

Great story, really HOT. Closer attention to proof reading would make for a smoother read. You seem to have a wonderfully kinky mind that I love. Keep writing.

cruiser_2015cruiser_20158 months ago

Great story exploring an imaginative theme!

banananpajamasbanananpajamas8 months ago

Dug the story but spell check needs to be your friend. Really takes you out of the story, and that half a second makes a difference.

Can't wait to read more though :)

ccitydudeccitydude5 months ago

Hate men much?

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Just somebody with a passion for writing dumb smut. Try not to take any of my stories too seriously lol. I'm always open if you have any questions or want to ask about something!