by Dirtynerdychick47
Damn this story is fuckin hot. I've read the whole series thus far while at work and wow. My only critique would be to be a bit more detailed when explaining what you're wearing. The sexual detail is great. I really enjoyed how you/she/the main character, and Jon were able to mutually orgasm, that is always great to do. Maybe in a future chapter, you could have Mariah squirt with Jon...just a thought. Overall, great work. Can't wait for the rest.