All Comments on 'Alpha'

This story is confusing at best. I have know idea what the hell is going on and not to be rude I'm not sure you have any clue either. Re-read it and tell me if it makes sense to you. Once minute he is a gamma in the present and at the end he is an alpha in the past then why isn't he still a gamma @ the beginning.

I understand what the last person was saying but I disagree. I think the story was very good but it does have a few gramatical and story problems. You switched around names a few times. Such as calling Rex Damian by mistake. However, I think it was a good try. With the help of an editor, all the problems should get fixed. Nicely done.

It was tongue in cheek and very, very well done in that the author succeeded in putting me in the underdog's head. I felt his love for his lady and his terror and resolve. Yes, there were some errors, but I've read the same in loads of stories on this site. This was a wonderful, feel-good story and I loved the canine touches. Licking his balls! LOL

Very nice Story there, I know your story is nearly six years old but I felt it deserved a comment for how well it was written. ^w^

This was a truly amazing story that was very well written. :)