All Comments on 'Alpha Stalker'

I love this one and can’t wait for more

I can live with typos, even the occasional misplaced comma, but this?

Why is the mc not wondering that "Alpha"" calls her "Luna?" Is she supposed to _also_ be a werewolf? Then why not say so in the story?

She escapes the first time, by getting the attention of some police. But there is no mention of what happens to "Alpha." Since the mc thinks about getting a Plan B prescription to avoid pregnancy surely she'd beg to be taken to a hospital; this would entail sexual assault claims, a rape kit, and "Alpha" winding up with a felony conviction and time behind bars.

The mc graduates college with honors, yet she is waitressing in a diner. Why not investment banking, HR, IT, etc?

WAY too many plot holes.

1-star

Definitely Ned’s to be a multi part story

Fuck got me soo wet; wish I had an Alpha to come and take me ;)