All Comments on 'Alter Ego Pt. 02'

and well written story. I love the graphic detail and how you describe Olivia's growing realization of her submissive nature and the satisfaction, the intense pleasure, that it brings.

It has the potential to be really erotic but he’s heavy on the arrogance and pushing hard. His attitude is kinda crappy it’s almost as though he’s trying to scare her away. Not every sub is a pain slut. The writing itself is pretty damned good but the story line seems rushed.

Tess (UK)