All Comments on 'Altered Genesis Ch. 01'

This story is hilarious.

Is this the same author who made a story called Altered Genesis on Chyoa? If so I loved that story, glad to have you back

Love this story!!

This is really hot. Thank you for posting! It is always a turn on to read from dominate women lusting over younger guys like myself.

You are reposting it!!!

Yes!

I can't think of a more perfect situation and this was eloquently written. I'm breathless...

This is wonderful, so sexy, so hopeless for the pretty buck! I really like how you've set up an alternate reality to facilitate your story. And Dean's internal journey is very believable.

Love this! Please post more!

Thank you so much for sharing your beautifully written story. Your descriptive style is amazing and the powerful dominant character of Charlotte is a breath of fresh air. I agree totally that Charlotte's character is far better than the usual 'Femdom' situation. New to Literotica so thought I would start your story at the beginning. Keep up the amazing work. You have a new fan!

Thank you all for the kind comments. I understand that this story is quite niche, so I didn't expect such a warm reception. Working on this story has been a learning experiance for me. Any constructive feedback or ideas are always welcome, feel free to reach out and contact me or comment.

This is absolutely the hottest writings on literotica. I started on chapter 12 and had to start from the beginning to read everything this dynamic author puts on paper. As a male, I think this is happening now with the role reversals and college admissions. Women are excelling. Please keep writing.

Story seems fine but I was expecting more of an overall view of the new world and not a personal account. Best of luck with the series.