All Comments on 'Altered World Ch. 01'

That was fun. Good pacing and good character development. Nicely done.

Great idea, and well told! Really looking forward to more!

A really strong start. looking forward to more.

Looking forward to how Mike destroys Brian and Karynn, hopefully.

Wow. Excellently written.

When the next chapter is ready I’ll be here patiently waiting.

Loving this story

That is incredibly hot. I am loving this story and will absolutoy be oooking forward to the next one.

Ok, only his girlfriend was bad, but all his friend's girlfriends were awesome. Seems like a "nice guy".

Well written and hot as hell

Grait story looking forward to the next chapters

Awesome stories can't wait for the rest

Great story. Really good written. Pls continue.

Awesome story. 5/5.

Brilliantly inventive and a joy to read. A definite 5*!

I cannot wait until the next chapter comes out!

A great story, but I don’t think this falls under ‘Mind Control’.

Some authors put cheating / revenge stuff under ‘Loving Wives’, but it probably fits better under ‘Sci-Fi & Fantasy’

This story is hot as hell! Whether it’s MC or Fantasy who cares? Incredible and looking forward to more.

Fantastic story, great plot and character developement, and VERY hot, can not wait for more chapters!

Really enjoyed the story. Looking forward to reading future chapters

This is extremely hot, entertaining and humorous. Please write more soon

Amazing story, I really hope there's a next chapter to this

Where is the reat?

This might as well have been titled "I'm Not Like the Other Guys: The Story".

Want more!!!!! Need to see what happens next. This is good.

WOW WTF MAN WE WANT ALOT MORE OF THIS STORY PLEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASE