All Comments on 'Alternative Path'

by Luke_n_Lacy

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AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Wow that made no sense.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Well that was fucked up. These characters deserve each other. Two fucked up brain dead characters probably like the writer.

Luke_n_LacyLuke_n_Lacy10 months agoAuthor

Thanks for checking it out anonymouses, sorry it wasn't your thing

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

"Thanks for checking it out anonymouses, sorry it wasn't your thing"

No, you're not. I know a troll when I see one, and this story was all of that.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

My favorite fantasy..eating a luscious creampie from my unfaithful wife’s cunt as my lover rams his throbbing cock into my boipussy..my wife laughing at me and when she calls me gay, I cum so hard..

JT

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

You’ve got talent , this wasn’t my thing , but you’re definitely a talented writer . 4 stars

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Oz is a great writer and always had the talent of writing in all different genres that makes him an eclectic writer for sure.

Anywho what is with the haters making crappy comments. - they need to leave….

This storyline of characters was easy to follow and I could picture the tense conversation that became playful at times. Nice work Oz.

Luke_n_LacyLuke_n_Lacy10 months agoAuthor

Smiley face hugging heart emoji; check out my blog if you're interested. Just my name on blogspot should get you there.

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