Am I Awake?

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I grabbed a coffee from the kitchen and walked about the house shouting for Debbie but there was no response and something in me told me not to expect one. It was the same thing in me that told me not to go into the basement and so I just left the door shut. The bag that I had put together the previous morning was still in the kitchen but it had been obviously opened and my wallet and passport had been taken out. The contents were spread out over the counter top and all of my ID cards had been destroyed, including my passport.

There were obviously fang holes in each of the photos, typically right in the middle of my face. I didn't know if it was a threatening message about what was going to happen to me or if it was just a practical way of making sure I wouldn't get on the morning flight. I was able to piece together who had made the holes. The clear answer was that both of the women had done. Debbie had typically left single small holes from her tiny sharp new fangs and the woman had left much bigger tears, often having just sliced a picture in half. I was all of a sudden pleased because it meant that Debbie was at least not just dead. Exactly what she was was a question I didn't want to think about right then.

It didn't matter either way to me, I knew immediately what to do. I grabbed the sailing bag and threw the green log book into it as well as my own small overnight bag. Then I headed down to the marina. It was a beautiful sunny day and there was a light but firming breeze that would give me an easy run over to Falmouth. It felt like an omen. It was a pleasure to run my hands over the carved runes that ran along the inset seams on the deck as I pulled myself aboard.

As I sailed across to the mainland, I decided not to go ahead with the plan to spend the week in Boston after all. I figured instead that I would take the boat south until I had properly digested the contents of Kelvin's log and had formed a plan that would let me come back to the house and deal with whatever was there.

In part II, Chris discovers that just because he owns the house, he certainly does not own everything in it. In fact it is just the opposite, she thinks she owns him and a boat and a plane ticket is just not enough to get away. The only hope of salvation is what might lie in Kelvin's log on his night stand, but, well, you know what that means...

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ImnotbobImnotbob22 days ago

Yeah, Chris may have been stupid, but so are most people, especially when everyone knows vampires aren just stories, right?

Can’t wait for the sequel. Does he give in? Does he triumph? Both?

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Can we all stop writing stupid main characters that do dumb things for the sake of forwarding the plot. It's incredibly frustrating to see when other aspects are so well done.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Chris is one of, if not, the dumbest person I've ever read about. Took him way too long to piece everything together and still almost gets himself killed. This would be an easy 4/5 but the protag's level of stupid could not be ignored and just ruined the rest of the story. 2/5

warelliswarellisover 1 year ago

Is there more to this? Do you know when Chapter 2 will be coming out?

Because this was really hot and I hope this gorgeous vampiress seduces Chris.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago
Well written but...

The main character is next level stupid. Like horror movie prom queen / cheerleader trope stupid. Hide in a shed with rusty farm tools and chainsaws stupid. Hook up with a gold digging shallow girl stupid. Accept a questionable drink from an blatantly cursed / evil / malignant being stupid. And that doesn't even factor in the depths of moronity it would take to stick head, fingers, or the tip of his dick out of the safety of the room.

With that said, your writing style can cast a spell of its own and pull a reader in. The problem was the main character was so jarringly dumb that it broke the spell time and again and ruined my attempts at suspension of disbelief.

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