All Comments on 'Amelia'

by MarkTass

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Dr2StrictDr2Strict6 months ago

Wonderful! A well conceived and written story. Great read. I hope that there are more chapters coming.

AnonymousAnonymous26 days ago

you should use italics for the characters' thoughts. Otherwise it's pretty good

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