All Comments on 'Amelia Ch. 01'

I'm looking forward to more!

Your story is off to a great start and I hope the next chapter comes out soon.

Nice start. Looking forward to more, and to finding out what Hunter is.

There's a lot of potential here - I can't wait to see how it develops!

This was a good start to your story. I really felt the characters come to life on the page. I hope you decide to finish or post more of this story. I suppose the initial reason I was attracted to your story, was the it used a certain element of mystery and vocal focusing to get the point/feelings across. I normally do not like the billionaire type stories, but I feel this one might end up being a tad unconventional, and you do have it labeled with non-human, but you haven't gotten to the part of the story where we find out how is this a non-human story. I like the romance and mannerisms you have added in, really helps me to get a full picture of the characters.