All Comments on 'Amorous Goods: Just a Drink'

This was….problematic.

Immortal. So he’ll live until the end of time? What happens when he outlived the sun and it turns into a red giant swallowing the earth? What happens when he is floating in space? Seriously. Immortal? And how many decades or centuries will pass before everything becomes boring: food, sex, friendships, slaves. At some point, the whole world will be as unthinking and unalive as a toaster and then what.

Unlimited power and immortality will only end in torment until even that grows boring.

It’s like the scene in Metro-Man where the villain realizes that being charge loses it’s luster.

yes whackdoodle, when ppl come to literotica they're looking for literature that makes sense. this is literature that college students should write essays about. :P

No. Just no.

Needs so much work I don't know where to begin. Spelling, sentence structure, cadence, believability (or an accurate suspension thereof...)

5 star failure. Hang up and please try your call again.