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All Comments on 'Amorous Goods: Mannequin'

by JaxRhapsody

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

I enjoy the dialog and the fast pace of the story. It does, however, feel like it is a small fragment of a larger story. I think it would have benefited with a longer introduction of characters and setting, as well as, elaboration in the action. All and all, it was quite enjoyable. I only wish there was more of it.

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