All Comments on 'Amorous Goods: Rebranded'

great little spin-off for the competition!

a sci-fantasy romp of delicious imagination, tech-inventions and orgies, even a cheery princess taking a holiday break as a mermaid. what more could a reader ask for?

the answer to the above is simply 'MORE!'

never get too TOI,

your greatest fan

butters

*kiss noise*

it's not letting me type the full 'robo-check' code to log in this side (only 4 digits of it) and won't let me favourite it as an anon though it WILL let me type the full security code as an anon. that's just weird

butters

On our thread I told you I wasn't expecting to see AG shop on this, but you expanded the lore quite a bit with this one! Nice employ of futuristic themes, I was hoping to see more descriptive sex scenes, but you dipped the reader's mind on several interesting scenes.

I'd have tuned down the worldbuilding a bit, give more char detailing to enhance the erotic imagination.

Overall, I think when things were starting to get heated the story ended... Hope we can see more of it eventually! Good one!