All Comments on 'Amy Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Dirty talk

I love the dirty talk between them. Will you make another chapter? Thank you from the Netherlands

BobNbobbiBobNbobbiover 10 years ago
Well written . . .

. . . but too short. The story needs more substance.

TornadoTysTornadoTysover 10 years ago
Too Short !

Nice to read were a wife is lusting after her husband and not another man.

Story was a little to short, however well written.

Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Great story.

But too short. Look forward to more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
are you going to

let Jill get a little action too? Although Amy isn't lusting for another man, Jill seems to be and Amy seems in agreement...

betrayedbylovebetrayedbyloveover 10 years ago
Nice

A loving husband and wife making love in their own bed. No anger. No cheating. No lusting after another.

This must be fiction.

Ha

LeFrog08LeFrog08over 10 years ago
(too)short and sweet

Very nicely done, otherwise. I just wish your "chapters" had a few more pages. I like those two characters, Amy & John and I'd like to read more...

pfflyerhotpfflyerhotalmost 10 years ago
I wonder...

Am I the only one who thinks your stories just the right length? Nice work, fafhrd09!

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I write smut fiction to relax after long days. I play World of Warcraft, play D&D, and have been an Avengers fan longer than you've probably been alive. I hope you enjoy my attempts at short, smutty fiction!

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