by rampe
Too easy.
I know it's fantasy but with no resistance - the story becomes unrealistic and boring.
I really enjoyed it and am glad it’s not non consensual although I would’ve liked her to have a few more hints to be clear it IS consensual but as a fantasy it’s good. Whoever commented that it’s boring bc she didn’t resist more has issues.
I liked this a lot. It's written in such a naive style that I wonder if English is the writer's native language, but it really doesn't matter. It made my cock hard, which is what an erotic story is supposed to do.
Good story - would like to see another chapter or so to see what else the 2 ladies have in mind for Amy's erotic development.
This story is only beginning! Let's have at least one more chapter, if not several more! Very hot so far!
Rampe must do another chapter to tell how the 2 older muscle ladies go to work on the young woman with other activities to make her their little muscular submissive slave!
Come on rampe! We know that you're teasing us! Let's have another chapter that includes enemas, tight bondage (maybe in latex or rubber) & even some spanking/whipping for cute little Amy by the two dominant muscle women!
Rampe, this is a great story, but you can't just leave it here! It is very hot so far, with a bit of mystery about the 2d woman, so please do another chapter (or 2) to clear things up & even some more adventures for Amy with the other 2 muscular women!
This story needs at least one - or 2 more - chapters to describe Amy's total experiences with the 2 dominant muscular lesbians! Very good writing job so far!