All Comments on 'Amy's Night Away'

So, the joke's on us!

5

Well done.

Guessed it about half-way through the first page but still very nicely done.

an easy end to see coming, but well written and nicely done!

You got me! Neat story and thoroughly enjoyed! And I don't have to read a bunch of mucho crap from the LW BTB crowd! They seem to forget what they read here is fiction. Well played!

Cheers

SAGE

Nice one Trionyx! 5*

Delightful turns in the story.

I continue to snag everything from you as it comes to my list of "Works" .... and have yet to be disappointed.

What a great story.... so intense, sexy, and with a twist. =)

Sorry to say I wasn't fooled (although that might in part have been wishful thinking on my part anyway). Still a lovely story

As soon as he said “sexy as hell”, I knew it was the husband but 5 stars anyway.

It was a great story and very sexy. Thanks for writing.

It was pretty obvious or maybe just used to writers playing tricks with characters at this site. Nice job!

Figures it out 1/2 way through, thats what made it more enjoyable for me. It's good to see that a couple still find ways to balance their responsibilities but still find time to enhance there love life together. Especially without going too far down that slippery slope of experimentation.

No joke here. The ending was telegraphed early on.

I thought that was her husband and in a way I really had hoped it was her husband but for me there was no real tell or give away. Well done.

Count me as another victim, although I feel like a chump for getting sucked in. I’d respect you more if you hadn’t added the afterward. Haha 😂

Great story! I like the ending and was relieved that she was not cheating!!

Well done!

Not really an april fools type joke, but a nice surprise ending. Looking back at it, I can see why they went through all that as part of their roleplay and how much fun it could be for them. Good story 5-stars.

Love the ending. Great work.

Great story. Hope they continue when they get home.

Great story and a hot fuck.

I love this! So happy to see a married couple just spice things up rather than cheat!

a loving couple!

Fun and sexy tale, Trionyx! The category and Rob/Bert were early clues about where this was going and I was glad for them that those clues ended up pointing correctly. Very nice job.

I hoped that was the way the story was going, but you kept up the doubt to the last sixty +/- words, though how "Maybe we could do this again sometime?" when they hadn't exhanged numbers was a hint just before, but could have been fixed with his business card. 5⭐!

The ending i hoped for ! 5 for me.

Now that was a fun twist

Great story, I thought it might a couple but fell for the twist anyways. 5 stars

Ah, remembrances of a night looking out at an aircraft carrier lit up in San Diego as a business colleague was taking me from behind.