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HighpikeHighpikeover 3 years ago
Enjoyed his immensely

but you were careless with names. Brittany morphed into Bethany.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Enjoyed it

Nicely set in Des Moines. Do you have more stories with the local flavor.

bsblfan2002bsblfan2002over 3 years ago

Good story. I recognize the DSM area.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Great story, thank you.

Harvey8910Harvey89103 months ago

This was in interesting story. I give it five stars. What an unusual arrangement!!! I loved the story and I hoped that it lasted for all three of them for a long time. Great job!!!!!

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