All Comments on 'An Alien Love Bk. 01 Ch. 07'

this is actually fun to read thanks

YAY. I'm glad someone is enjoying my fun alien stuff! Cheers.

I’m loving these and I hope you make more

authors, fall into: non-genuine communication.

People are explainers. They are explainers because they seek to find commonality w/ others. The more difference, the more the urge to explain themselves.

Murry has never been able to communicate w/ anyone. I can understand while he was injured, possibly dying, & suffering in pain, he might not explain he's never communicated before, but now that he's healed & pain free, it's just not realistic he wouldn't explain his past to Kel.

When Kel recreated the group home, I thought you were going to have Murry explain what the group home was & why Murry lived there, but you blew right hy the opportunity.

Authentic communication & dialogue is the basis for a reader's connection to a character. The more realistic a character acts or reacts to situations, the more likely a reader will find commonality w/ a character.

Readers finding commonality w/ characters, & being able to see themselves in characters, or in their situations, more strongly connects them to a story.