by misterlolz
This story is AWESOME!! MAKE A PART TWO, PLEASE!!!! YOU NEED TO MAKE A PART TWO OF THIS!! Omg! I got so hard! MAKE A PART TWO!!!
(The only suggestions I make are 1: Add more detail during the sex parts, and 2: Try to stop exaggerating their breasts so much. Other than that, so good!)
A delicious setup, great villains (goblin and sorcerer), his magic was really unusual and erotically envisioned. Would have loved if he spent more time with her before taking away her consciousness. The story deserves many chapters but the ending implies it's one and done. :(