All Comments on 'An Apology'

A pity more people don't try this. Anyway nicely written and very erotic. Carry on writing.

Yes, very erotic. Marriages would last a lot longer if more people practiced this after arguing.<P>

Thanks for sharing.

but for the idea you only get half the points. I have my own drama queen at home and til this day she hasn't understood that when she made me angry the last thing I want is sex. She at least has so far learned that I don't think reconciliation-sex is the best. sex is not a way for me to say I'm sorry.

After a disagreement with my wife last night she went off to bed in a huff, while I decided to read the New Erotica submissions. After reading and enjoying your story I decided to try and do the same. She awoke just she was coming from my blow job and, apart from requesting that I apologise twice before moving up the bed, my reality was very similar to your story. The best part though was in the morning when she woke me in a similar way after having got up and cooked my favourite breakfast.

Thank you Karysta and keep writing.

Kiwi87

The description of the couple having sex was very explicit and erotic. I enjoyed reading the activity of the couple. I have read both of your short stories and would like to see you write a long envolved multi-chapter, multi-character sexually explicit story with twists and turns in the plot.I think you could be very good at it. Thanks for the story.....Rich

it's ashame writers like this stop writing

I loved this; well done. Makes me wish I was married again.

Damn straight, apology accepted.