All Comments on 'An Arrangement between Coworkers Ch. 02'
by persephonette
- 13 Comments
mrwidehorizonsover 2 years agoCant wait to see what he offers, bet its more than just $ ! Great story, and happy Halloween! Thanks for sharing here
Anonymousover 2 years agoGood prmise continue.
But it goes nowhere. No actual sex of any kind. Just sets the stage for some future activity.
She could have wanted to see his cock. She could have wanted to see him playing with/jerking it while she discussed his particular likes/kinks/fetishes.
MUCH too short.
Three stars.
sadbluekidover 2 years agoNice exposition, looking forward to seeing where it goes. I hope there are several more parts to this story. As an author on here who gets some anonymous feedback all I would say is take the advice you like, ignore the rest and write for yourself. Enjoy
Anonymousover 2 years agoAnother cute twist to the series, She'll have him in chastity and in the end of her strap on in another week or two.
Cornixover 2 years agoShort, sharp, incredibly erotic. 5*
Sex doesn't need genitals. Most BDSM, and in particular Findom, is cerebral. If you wish to include more traditional sexual acts, great; however this has sexual tension and is building chemistry.
I hope this goes on for a long time. Your writing style will always cause detractors, but I have loved your works and have now followed you.
The most important person tou write for is you, do what makes you happy, but I for one have loved your works to date. Thank you.
subbytover 2 years agoSo sexy findom story. Love the IRL colleague arrangement scenario.
I hope there will come more chapters for this story.
And I hope you will keep on making her seduce him into paying her. And maybe let the blackmail get serious by having get humiliating pictures of him
1Martinimanabout 2 months agoPart 2 is good as part 1 was…but getting better. Why so short tho? There’s so much promise here for a very long and erotic story.
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