by persephonette
This just gets better and better I can't wait for things to keep escalating and for Claire to have him pay almost everything and even getting a second job on top off working on her house
Still a good premise.
But barely erotic at all. Just setting the stage for what happens next.
Two stars.
Love this serie and can't wait for next part.
But personally, I think the girl starts to become a bit too "humane" since we start to hear all her thoughts about "did I push him to far". Also also all his excuses of being into it.
Would love to she that she starts to become more natural in the role and it become a bit more abusive.
Anyhow. Great story and can't wait for the next ;)
I’m obsessed with this story! So fun and the way the characters have developed this relationship feels so organic!
Can’t wait for an update! Like others have mentioned, i too hope she dominates him even more in the next chapters. Story has been amazing so far
This is the first new series for ages on lit that has held my attention. I look forward to the next part
Good premise.
But, like two previous chapters, too short.
Not enough actually happens. It's ALL future.
Four stars.
Well this ended up being pretty boring. I was hoping for a longer story leading to Luke being dominated at Claire’s house and then at work…maybe leading to romance. Instead Claire insults him and then the story is abandoned.