All Comments on 'An Arrangement between Coworkers Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Brilliant

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

KEEP IT GOING!!! :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This just gets better and better I can't wait for things to keep escalating and for Claire to have him pay almost everything and even getting a second job on top off working on her house

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Still a good premise.

But barely erotic at all. Just setting the stage for what happens next.

Two stars.

Fuzzi77Fuzzi77over 2 years ago

I really liked this. The characters are there for a very interesting story.

subbytsubbytover 2 years ago

Love this serie and can't wait for next part.

But personally, I think the girl starts to become a bit too "humane" since we start to hear all her thoughts about "did I push him to far". Also also all his excuses of being into it.

Would love to she that she starts to become more natural in the role and it become a bit more abusive.

Anyhow. Great story and can't wait for the next ;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I’m obsessed with this story! So fun and the way the characters have developed this relationship feels so organic!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Can’t wait for an update! Like others have mentioned, i too hope she dominates him even more in the next chapters. Story has been amazing so far

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This is the first new series for ages on lit that has held my attention. I look forward to the next part

subiectosubiectoover 2 years ago

What a cool storke, stuff of dreams, sincerely hope there is more to come

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Good premise.

But, like two previous chapters, too short.

Not enough actually happens. It's ALL future.

Four stars.

1Martiniman1Martinimanabout 1 month ago

Well this ended up being pretty boring. I was hoping for a longer story leading to Luke being dominated at Claire’s house and then at work…maybe leading to romance. Instead Claire insults him and then the story is abandoned.

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Domme and writer in my late 20s. Back on my writing game, looking to write exciting femdom stories that make losers get hard in their chastity cages. If you like my work and feel inclined, I accept tips on: https://www.wishtender.com/persephonette