All Comments on 'An Auburn Aphrodite Ch. 02'

by lilmizzscandal

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bad_girl69bad_girl69over 15 years ago
hahaha

GREAT!! lol. I just love her personality. :) It is very amusing. I think you did a wonderful job with this second chapter. I do hope you can continue this story, and not make me wait so long.. lol :D Cant help it. Now i really want to know whats going to happen next. I still cant believe she bit down hard on his tongue... lmao.. haha Just great!

lilmizzscandallilmizzscandalover 15 years agoAuthor
writers block

prehaps you could suggest some plot lines for the next chapter as I'm a bit stuck for ideas. what would you like to hear about?

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Keep her heading for freedom

I like that she refuses to just become a slave, love her fiery nature, could have a little bit more info on him, what is he thinking...why is he attracted to her.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

No chapter 3 ?!

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