All Comments on 'An Average Day'

by SamuelDuke

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago

Nice story. 2nd part soon please

maddictmaddictabout 5 years ago
Aw

Nothing ventured nothing gained

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
An Average Day

And less than an average score.

She errantly shares a photo and not much else.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Dull Maddie

Maddie stayed in character throughout your story, except for taking off her panties in the work space. She would have used the restroom. Her photo flash didn't expose anything to this reader. In chapter two let Maddie loose, Have her do something that would give her male coworker's a hard-on without jepardizing her job.

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