by OmarBK
This was written with tenderness and feeling; something not often found here. I hope you keep writing.
It's interesting that you chose a middle aged Chinese woman as the focus of your fantasy. That's a unique perspective. I would not have thought of it; somehow I don't consider middle aged Chinese women (at least the ones that I know) to be interested in sex at all. But then I've never had a discussion about sex with a Chinese woman, young or old, so I'm not a qualified arbiter. Your writing style is interesting. Very short paragraphs--sentences, really. I was a little turned off by all the loogies, but your unique perspective and characters kept me reading.