All Comments on 'An Eventful Day Out'

by RedDragon13

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northlandernorthlanderalmost 13 years ago
A Nice Start

No longer just friends, the opportunities are many for a continuance of the story, go for it.

RedDragon13RedDragon13almost 13 years agoAuthor
Thanks!

Thanks for the feedback! I'm toying with a few ideas and the moment, hoping to possibly make the second part a bit more intense and a bit longer, I'll likely start working on it soon :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
turn on

this was a hot story, sure made me cum, can't wait for the sequal

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