All Comments on 'An Evil Woman'

Loved this story. Had me gripped and looking forward to the next parts as well... and the sex was hot as well.

Mmm, good to see you back, and with such a tremendous opening - female Phillip Marlowe plus hot lesbian sex’s, what more could a girl want? 5 big golds ones xxxxx

Excellent well written story, looking forward to part 2.

An excellent beginning, I look forward to seeing how this story develops. Very well written, it was a pleasure to read. Five stars.

Excellent start!

Intrigue, danger, sexy women, and hot sex!

Ready for more….

...and occasional writer of the hard-boiled detective genre, I think this story is showing plenty of promise. And the more evil you can make your villain, the better---truly evil characters are usually so much more interesting than the others. I'm looking forward to the next chapter to see how your plot develops.

Go deeper.

Wow! Excellent start at this genre of the detective noir. Loved each and every little bit of it.

Intriguing set of characters, crisp dialogue, hot sex scene and just enough suspense. You’ve got my attention. Thanks for sharing. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Well, you've got me hooked. A very good read leaving this reader panting for more. Just loved the sex on the beach but the requirement of an anal douche was perhaps a detail too far but a worthy five stars nonetheless.

Yes a very wonderful start to well developed beginning. Great characters and and well done storytelling. Enjoyable read and looking for more of this evil woman that is lurking in the shadows. So rock it on and bring us some drama. Thanks for your time to write and publish. Cheers

My only complaint is the switching around between third person and first person was fairly confusing. Please stick with one or the other and stick with it.

Yes, I agree with you anonymous, I confuse myself sometimes.

🌹 A Red Rose! ;-)

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Hallo Arking!

I know it's early yet, only chapter-1 but The Black Queen and I, really love hot lesbian mysteries and this is very enjoyable mystery, however we are still looking for your evil woman, and have taken quite a liking to Corrie,,, yes!

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Thank-You, 5-Stars and 5-Hot Red 🌹 Orgasms..

The Black Queen and Gay Kat!

This starts creepy ….. chinese mafia or mafia at all are definitely dangerous groupies …. So hopefully our PI will stay alive, not ending in a death end alley and discovering she is not bullet proof ….. for the teenage girls, this sounds already like tragedy

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