by Interjection
I enjoyed it, it was quite good and I liked the detail. next time I'd like to see some action after to extend the story as it was quite short. Also add a bit of context of who is who and why they're there/what they're doing. But otherwise great work keep it up!
I loved the POV, especially as someone who enjoys fantasies of getting injected in my butt. It was as if you were talking to me.