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EastCoaster1EastCoaster19 months ago

Sorry...

...while I don't think this is one of your best works, I think it's because the ending you have doesn't quite have your tongue planted far enough into your cheek, and it just may be a tad too subtle !

4 stars for it and in appreciation of all of your stories.

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