by awriterssojourn
Wonderful story. I could almost see each of them. Jane is an excellent character. Your writing is very good. I added you as a favorite. MORE PLEASE>
Reminds the 5-part Virgin neighbor series.
Although Jane, Hubby Mason and young stud Colton are getting very close personal soon enough into Hot wife territory. Continue on
Cheers!
Great start to the story. I'm looking forward to young Colton seducing and bedding Jane. Keep up the excellent work!
It is a well-written story with an excellent plot. The dialogue between the couple was extremely well done. The side story of John oagling Mason's wife, and Colton having the time of his young life. He has a house-sitting job that many would give their first-born for. The descriptive detail of the watching and the sex was almost perfect. The setup for the following chapters is clear, and I look forward to the next chapter.