All Comments on 'An Obsession with Jane Pt. 01'

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amritaloveramritalover3 months ago

Wonderful story. I could almost see each of them. Jane is an excellent character. Your writing is very good. I added you as a favorite. MORE PLEASE>

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Reminds the 5-part Virgin neighbor series.

Although Jane, Hubby Mason and young stud Colton are getting very close personal soon enough into Hot wife territory. Continue on

Cheers!

WifeWatchmanWifeWatchman3 months ago
Excellent

Great start to the story. I'm looking forward to young Colton seducing and bedding Jane. Keep up the excellent work!

WoodencavWoodencav3 months ago

Awesome ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

rbell42rbell423 months ago

Part 2, please. Very hot.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Who is James?

His name appears exactly once.

mitchawamitchawa30 days ago

It is a well-written story with an excellent plot. The dialogue between the couple was extremely well done. The side story of John oagling Mason's wife, and Colton having the time of his young life. He has a house-sitting job that many would give their first-born for. The descriptive detail of the watching and the sex was almost perfect. The setup for the following chapters is clear, and I look forward to the next chapter.

DickTraceyDickTracey14 days ago

Great story

Thanks

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