All Comments on 'An Office Trip of Ria'

Spelling sucks. You need an editor or a proofreader.

Is English your native tongue? The spelling and grammar is horrible !!

Good writing and story.

DIDN'T FINISH THE STORY.

Y0UR ENGLISH WRITING, IS HORRIBLE AND NEEDS A LOT

OF WORK.

I DON'T LIKE STORIES, WHERE INNOCENT PEOPLE ARE TAKEN ADVANTAGE OF.

WE HAVE ENOUGH OF THAT CRAP, GOING ON IN OUR WORLD.

Impresive but writer can add more to story