All Comments on 'An Old Girlfriend, A New Life Pt. 04'

Always glad to read a new chapter by you!

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Helena married Carl on page three of your 4 page chapter. Are you a moron? Did Helena find out why the MC didn't marry Kitty? Your message that MC and Kitty should have been married 26 years before is clear but the rationale for why MC and Helena divorced never made sense.

Maybe you should have read the earlier chapters. It was clear that in Artie's heart, Kitty was the love of his life. He and Helena had a good marriage for about 15 years, but the last 5 they grew apart. They still care about each other and love each other, but they had to divorce because their marriage had become unloving. And please, Don't call anyone a moron. It's rude, and just shows you to be a low person. I'd prefer you not read any of my other works.

Never mind the naysayers. Always look forward to reading your stories. I won’t descend to the commenters level. Suffice to say that if he/she has issues with your tales, he/she can read elsewhere.