All Comments on 'An Older Virgin'

Great story, you could have had a few more chapters.

A great read and 5 Stars

A good read

Sexy story, I could imagine this happenning

Good story!

5

Great premise for a story. I wish you hadn't rushed the courtship. Seems like the male just shows up and she immediately falls into his arm's. Would have loved having the courtship stretched out. The woman was a nun for quite some time, might take more time to change her beliefs, or maybe more of a back story about her decision to leave the church.

very well done!

I gave it four stars. Good story nevertheless. The only reason that it wasn't five was due to the unnecessarily crude language. It really didn't fit for a former nun and successful businessman. I also agree with other comments that more lead in and foreplay. She really wanted to experience a deep creampie.

Oh wow , excellent

Oh wow , excellent

Excellent I hope there is more to the story

Unnecessarily crude language 🤣

Yup, finish out the love scene. Forty is not too old for pregnancy. Become FWBs. More dates and dinners. Go on vacations. Have her become the significant partner. Get her a job at your company?? Three, four kids not so far-fetched.

'monster cock' ROFLMAO. Seriously, very hilarious. You should do stand-up, but maybe give up on erotica.

4/5, would have been 5/5 if you had finished the story.

VERY WELL DONE. NOW, HOW ABOUT DOING ANOTHER CHAPTER

you never finished the story. why?

Try not using names as much when switching between characters talking

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A good concept, rather spoiled by the language used by an ex-nun and former pupil - totally unnecessary.

It was a very long stretch to believe that they would talk about anal sex on a first date and insist on shaving her pubes before having sex for the first time