All Comments on 'An Uncooperative Elevator'

Cant wait for the next chapter,please dont delay it,i love the concept

Intersting start but will there be a middle as well as an end? It's alittle hard to get into a story that migt not happen.

Hope that's not the case because the starting is a good one.Lakergirl

Enjoyed this story looking forward to the next chapter. I have been looking for A Diference in Politics dying to know what happened with the motorcycle accident.

Hope U continue the story??!!

The title of my comment is my main complaint. I do not know what story the others commenting read, but this reads as if a teen wrote it. I had to cease from reading it. Grammar is important!

I loved it. I usually always notice grammar, spelling, and such, but this time I didn't I just followed the story trying to figure out what was next. Keep it coming.

Thanks for a great read.

But I liked it a lot as is, so five stars for a very good story with interesting characters and dialogue.

i love this story as well. im hoping there will be another chapter to this. please update your stories.

LOVE THE DIRECTNESS OF BOTH CHARACTERS. LOOKING FORWARD TO MORE ON THE BOTH OF THEM,,,,

IT WAS A GOOD READ, HOPE TO READ MORE SOON

This was a really good story. I hope thee is more to come.