by secret_liyah
LOVE THE DIRECTNESS OF BOTH CHARACTERS. LOOKING FORWARD TO MORE ON THE BOTH OF THEM,,,,
i love this story as well. im hoping there will be another chapter to this. please update your stories.
But I liked it a lot as is, so five stars for a very good story with interesting characters and dialogue.
I loved it. I usually always notice grammar, spelling, and such, but this time I didn't I just followed the story trying to figure out what was next. Keep it coming.
The title of my comment is my main complaint. I do not know what story the others commenting read, but this reads as if a teen wrote it. I had to cease from reading it. Grammar is important!
Enjoyed this story looking forward to the next chapter. I have been looking for A Diference in Politics dying to know what happened with the motorcycle accident.
Intersting start but will there be a middle as well as an end? It's alittle hard to get into a story that migt not happen.
Hope that's not the case because the starting is a good one.Lakergirl
Cant wait for the next chapter,please dont delay it,i love the concept