All Comments on 'An Unexpected Distraction Pt. 03'

This is a beautifully written drama. The characters have real depth and the story line never slacks for a moment. The romantic atmosphere is very touching and passionate, a wonderful love story to be cherished. However, this chapter is not a stand alone story; An Unexpected Distraction needs to be read from Chapter 1. It also should really have been classified in the Romance genre as this would better inform the reader of the nature of the story, especially since good romance stories like this are not common on the site.

Good story and hot sex. A little redundant with practically every incident being replayed by each character involved. A bit distracting but over all a good narrative.

One thing truly puzzling is all the apologizing for Steven's behavior during the holdup? I doubt the perp is as contrite for what he did as the hero is made out to be!

All in all a good 5 star story. Keep writing and keep sharing this is close to a 10 star piece with practice.

Cheers

SAGE

I don't understand the chapter change during a continueing sequence.

AAARRROOOOOOOO! AAARRROOOOOOOO! Werewolves of London!

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LOL