All Comments on 'An Unexpected Distraction Pt. 06'

NO!!! What are you trying to do to me? You can't kill off Theresa!!!! Such an amazing story, I'm completely invested in these characters. Ajroye, not trying to tell you how to write but if you could....please start the next chapter with some words like "benign brain tumor" & "easily removed". 😉 Keep writing, I'll keep reading!

I want you to know first your story and writing are surprizingly good. Your build up of their relationship was real from a emotional side but physical in this era was unrealistic with the amount of passion you added to the story. But now to go dark...WTF are you thinking ? You go go from :" awe shucks missy" for weeks with great romanic build up then go " DARK". Alittle FYI for you... not everyone here has a kink of being with his mom, his sister ot 70 yo grandma, or watching his wife take on everybody on the bus or pull a train. To some of us this is a erotic escape to a place were life is filled with romance and a love that fills your soul. You wrote 5 chapters of good content ! Why ruin the vibe ? You have built aladder of a story of the possiblity of being perfect then... ruined the fanticy