All Comments on 'An Unexpected Pleasure'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Nice sex, but...

so this old guy pulls out a gun and forces him into a car. I'm with you so far. The protagonist tries to free himself but it doesn't work. And then the abductor puts the gun in his pocket? Why? And then Drew doesn't take this chance to free himself? Why? And then they tell him it's a toy gun. And he again doesn't try free himself? Why? The old chick then tells him that Henry is asleep so it's only a 28 year old male against an old broad. And then he does what the old chick tells him to do and lets her tie him up? Why? Sorry but this is totally, completely, ridiculously unbelievable.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Good sex, well written characters- especially in the last half.

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