All Comments on 'An Unexpected Reaction'

I DON'T USUALLY READ LONG STORIES BUT THIS IS THE 3RD OR 4TH TIME I'VE READ THIS STORY. I CAN'T FIND AN ISSUE WITH ANY OF IT.

AND "BABYDOLL" IS AMAZINGLY GORGEOUS IN EVERY WAY. FROM A BAD START THIS GUY GOT A REALLY WONDERFUL BABE.

Another multiple re read. I keep wondering what city that is, but it's ultimately irrelevant.

A lovely story. Thank you.

Didn't notice any mistakes, but I was more interested in reading a truly great story. Glad that Jace stuck to his guns about dumping Becky, wouldn't have been much of a story if he had wimped out and taken her back. Loved the ending too. Five stars, thanks.

Great story all around. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️5 stars from me..

Thank you I really in joyed reading your story. Good job hope you will post more

You invested so much time on developing Becky then drop her . think there was a stream you could have followed, but I prefer resolution, that’s just me

Actually two stories. The first was okay and rated a three. The second was great and deserved a five (or a six if there was an option). Have to admit I'm rereading this and jumped to Page 6 because the first part was a bore.

But, as others have said, the last part (the "ball squeezing bit" not only didn't fit but it actually detracted from the story. And as for the admonition not to be in the same room as that woman, that doesn't work unless Amanda expects him to never attend another industry function again.

Wow! Good Story! The depiction of the disabling effects of the protagonist's rage and the counseling/ arbitration sessions were most interesting. And also the second relationship's special challenges. Thanks!

I usually don't enjoy stories that are this long. This one I found to be very well done.

This is my 4th reading and it always makes me tear up. Such a wonderful story that is well written by with exceptional characters and emotional beyond belief.

Funniest part was the idea that a cop would actually be disciplined for misconduct. ACAB

You are a great writer, and find myself transported into every story you write. I have read and reread this one in particular. As it is one of my absolute favorites. Thank you for keeping wonderful stories coming in. I enjoy them immensely.

The very last part seems disconnected from the rest. In the last 4 paragraphs, it sounds as if Amanda wasn't in New York with him, or hadn't overheard him making a very clear and definitive declaration.

This is the second time I read it. I cried more this time than the first time. This time I really got into the emotion of the story especially after him meeting Amanda. This is one of the stories I have read that rates much more than 5 stars. I haven't read many like that. Thank you.

This is the second time I read it. I cried more this time than the first time. This time I really got into the emotion of the story especially after him meeting Amanda. This is one of the stories I have read that rates much more than 5 stars. I haven't read many like that. Thank you.

CONGRATULATIONS for this FANTASTIC story!!! I love it!!!

Second time around still 5/5 a really special story

Awesome ! 5 stars well earned!

Top notch!

Not much sex, but you tell a helluva story.

Top notch!

Not much sex, but you tell a helluva story.

My fourth or fifth time through. Still get tears in my eyes at the end. Five stars a must.

Read this several times. It is a great story

One of the best stories on this site...3rd time and still love it just as much as the first time.

Without question absolutely one of the best, if not actually the best story on Literotica. IMHO

Wayne

Glad I'm not the only one who loves this story, many reads, love it more every time.

Brilliant, very, very well done.

I've read this four times and have loved it every time. Always a 5

Great story Becky got what s

I’m an avid reader of books and stories. I can’t speak for everyone, but in my opinion this is not only the best story I’ve ever read from Literotica, but the best one I’ve ever read period. Thank you for your penmanship.

👌

I thoroughly enjoyed this story. I'm sure it hit home to those that read it. Continue the good work.

Wow. That was pretty amazing.

You're close in your closing comment. However, rather than two installments, you should have split it into two stories. The second story, except for the rambling at the end trying to tie it back to the first story, is a pretty good romance story. I think it would have done well in that category on it's own.

Unfortunately, the first story is the problem. Your first mistake was sticking a random scene from the middle of the story on the front. Your second mistake was not making it immediately clear that you were doing a time jump back to the actual start of the story. I could see some interesting potential story lines with his next girlfriend having the same name as his ex-wife, but I wasn't exactly happy with the choice. Then I realized you were just too lazy to explain that you were jumping back to before she was his wife rather than continuing the story post-divorce. If that wasn't bad enough, the story itself kind of sucked. Putting the opening scene in the proper place would have helped, but it wouldn't have saved it. All-in-all, the first story is a subpar but not horrible entry that is pretty common in the LW category.

I enjoyed your story. I thought it was well written and it held my interest. Anyone with above average intelligence could understand that the first part of your story was the aftermath of the affair and then you slipped back in time to explain the relationship.

One of the best, truly believable and well told. Congratulations and I look forward to your next one.

I absolutely loved this story, so much so, that I was sorry when it ended.

Troisième fois que je relis cette histoire et je suis toujours autant emballé. Merveilleux. Continuer dans ce genre.

why is it that women are so good w/ 20/20 hindsight? They ruin their marriages by taking their men for granted, expecting no push back when their cheating is exposed(blame the democraps and feminazis for setting up this expectation that noone [especially women]are responsible for their actions [except white males] so forgive and forget), then realize after the fact that what they had was pretty special, she made a mistake and you really are my soulmate, so forgive and forget? Most of that sex areentitled, arrogantly dumb and mostly fairly nasty selfish bitches. rk

A fun story to read. Thank you.

The huge mistake in this story I saw was Aida's husband told her to tell Jace about Becky cheating then he supposedly cheats on her later? Nope that.does not work in the story for the side character.

Otherwise its a nice story cheesy in a lot of places but still decent.

Even after 7 reads, this is still one of your best!

Thanks L

I have read this story many times and I never get sick of it. Thank you.

As others have said, two stories here. The first is a 3.5 and the second a 6.

And I see an earlier comment where someone pointed out the "ball squeezing" bit was not only unnecessary and out of character but it also detracted from the story.

I've read this before, and it still gets me going. It is so close. thank you.

He really didn't deserve Amanda for what he did to Becky.

@jujudailian— on a website full of the dumbest comments ever, yours takes the first place stupid prize. What are you, Becky’s schmo dad? Seriously dude?

I don't know what he expected from her after what he saw in the initial phase of their relationship.

Stupid is as stupid does I guess...

I really enjoyed this excellent story. I am amazed at how critical some readers are of free stories.

A very well written story I never hesitate to come back to. I say that as a successful professional writer of long standing.

I love stories with happy endings!

Nuevamente 5 estrellas

Me encanta esta fantasía.

One of your best stories but I got a little confused about Celeste's age, present and when Amanda last saw her. "Jujudailan" (1 mo. ago) must have read a totally different story or he likes to make really stupid comments

A really good story, I loved watching the character development. I think it could be successful beyond Literotica. Please don't stop writing.

I hate this story with a passion.

Oh, don't get me wrong. It well written. And I congratulate the author. It's a testimony to his skills that I feel so much for this story.

I dislike the MC though.

He should never have gotten back to her in the initial stages. That's what you get for not listening to your gut.

Everything that happened after he deserves, 10 times over.

It's good the story ended with him in a good place. I won't dispute that.

I still dislike him very very much.

Simply one of the best stories on here, if I could give it a 10 I would⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

color lines was unnecessarily racist bs

I really loved this story!! Great job!

Well written. Really enjoyed it!

Jace is really a dumb asshole. She lied and her friend business partner's wife keeps covering for her yet he still marries the whore. He is a dumb cuck

Absolutely first class writing. My guess is you have a fair amount of background in the ad agency biz. And sadly, far too much experience with infidelity.

One major reason I found your story captivating was because of your authority as an author. Either you have the ability to imagine the innerworkings of the lives of your characters, or as I stated earlier, you have first-hand experience, or more likely, you have both!

I look forward to reading your future literary contributions.

A very, very good story. I hate the sheep mentality that so many women fall into...especially when their bad sheep. Becky is a cunt.

Good story. I personally wished, that Becky got more of her comeuppance. When they met, she should have look old beyond her years and was physically looked terrible. All of Becky's boyfriends or husbands cheated on her. The author was a bit too kind in that situation, but some people are more forgiving then I could be for what a cheating wife did to me.

Loved it as you can see by my 5 star vote. You grabbed my attention and held it from beginning to end. All the characters depicted seemed very real to me, like people I would expect to meet in real life, so real, in fact, I shared a lot of the emotions they felt. I'm looking forward to enjoying more of your stories. Keep up the the great work and thank you.

The best story of read here since the beginning of reading all your stuff. Thank you for the hours of enjoyment.

Two stories here. The first is a 4 (maybe a 3.5) and the second is a 6 - hence my overall rating of 5.

But the last piece detracts from the story - and from a practical point of view it's impossible for Jace to avoid Becky in the future (that is unless he wants to completely stop attending industry events)

That was a good story.

Loved it, thanks!

Oh my loard. Tears and cheers. I loved this stories. For a 69 year old man I'm not a shame to say I had lots of tears on my cheeks. Thank you

Robert

I am 83 years old and have been riding Harleys for 67 years , I just loved this story and yes some tears came.

Always has to be the "look how better I'm doing than you" bit, this time with the added I'd drop my present partner for you in a flash, which would make you think she hadn't learnt a thing throughout all those years. Yeah I know it makes a certain kind of reader feel good as it vicariously achieves what they never managed to in their own personal cuckolding, but really ... the MC moved on, it really doesn't matter what happened to his previous wife because if it did it's presence in his everyday consciousness would have detracted from his present life ... so when people say forgive and forget, and some people say I'll never forget, those are the people that have allowed someone else to live rent free in their mind, those are the people who are living the pain everyday because they can't move on and forget the unimportant part of their life, the past.

beer cheers tears and motorcycles LOVED IT

i will wear your balls for earrings FUNNY

Fantastic story!

The last part messed up the story. It was obvious the threat was not needed, and would tend to hurt their relationship for years to come. You should have found a better ending than showing her doubting everything he had said and done since they met. The rest of the story gets a 5, but that last part knocks it down to just above a 4.

Just a great story that I have read many times and still enjoy the quality of the read

Another great story and as it turned out, two stories for the price of one. And the story got almost to 1000 comments. That tells me a lot of people loved the story. Good on ya!

Great read and kept me up until 2 am to finish.👏🏻👍🏻. Could’ve been in the romance category as well. Keep writing⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

A well written story, it kept me engaged till the end even though I didn't find Jace sympathetic. I felt for him for sure but a guy with anger issues 'spanking' a traumatized woman because she pissed him off and the way he dealt with Celeste just felt wrong to me. Great that Aida showed up but her marriage also ended because of cheating..there are more reasons for a marriage to end. Becky resurfacing and Amanda feeling threatened enough to squeeze his balls kind of diminished the strenght of their relationship.

I loved the bar and the patrons, glad Jace found real friends, the hospital scene was powerful I really felt it and sighed from relief when the outcome was positive. Thanks for sharing.

Slightly creepy, JC behaves like a little kid, failed to learn from his first mistake and then after having a temper tantrum because he can't keep his wife faithful he goes off and grooms a homeless teenager. The fact that he's in a profession well known for those with incredibly low moral standards isn't missed and make his moral high horsing all the more ironic.

This is my second time reading. Very well wriiten and good story. I didn't like the last little bit where Amanda demanded that Jace never be in the same room with his ex and hated when she grabbed his balls. Not a good way to end the story.

She cheated on him while they were dating. Why was he surprised?

Definitely a great read and I have several times

Excellent CR

The absolute best story I have ever read in Literotica. Thank you so much!!!!

Well written. Really enjoyed it.

Stunningly beautiful story. Thank you.

creo que esta excelente comedia mantiene el 3er lugar, en toda literotica, en cuanto a la cantidad de cliches jajaaj

una fantasía para calmar corazones jajaja

Great story. All that needs to be said.

Wow! what a superb story. I couldn't stop reading once I started. Yes there are a lot of typos and other errors but they don't detract from the captivating plot. The tasering cop scene was a bit silly but hey the rest was excellent. Well done!.

Stupid cuck called the third lawyer on the list instead of the shark!! He is a cuck second time round!! Tge bitches Cin and Becky knew how to play him

Aside from the Allan-Cyn-Becky drama, well deserved 5*

beautiful!

Either this or "The Unicorn" is the best story I've ever read on this site

2 for 2, but these are the only ones I’ve read so far, one more and I’m going to petition Literotica to add a few more stars. Wish I could think of something better than Thank You but it’s the best I have for now.

I must have read this story six times... Why do I still tear up at all "those" same familiar places? It's a wonderful tale. I wonder if I'll be commentator 1000?

Fine! Also have read this @ 5 times, so will add to my very short list of favorites.

It was a great story

Great story. I loved it. 5 stars.

Still one of the best stories on here I've read this more than once and it still entertains me. Bad shit happens in life and so does good shit. Sometimes we have to go through the bad to find the good. If these were real people I would hope one day they have a light bulb moment and realise how ugly those "friends" are inside. Probably not but one can hope. BardnotBard

One of the best I’ve read on Lit.