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All Comments on 'An Unexpected Romance Ch. 054-067'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Loving this story.Brilliant.

sjohns219sjohns219over 2 years ago
A request

I'm enjoyingthe unraveling of the story and the fleshing out of the characters,I would like to see one change, could you please make the chapters longer? Or perhapsa shorter break betweenthem?

Thank you.

DogmancyprusDogmancyprusover 2 years ago

Excellent story, told by a talented writer. There is depth to the characters, and you weave them so well. 5*'s all the way. Keep it coming.

HemmingswayHemmingswayover 2 years ago

I don't get all the tiny chapters. Seems to block the story flow and dumb down the author's effort.

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