All Comments on 'An Unexpected Romance Ch. 068-081'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Loving this story .

sjohns219sjohns219over 2 years ago
Enjoying the story

I'm enjoying the unraveling of the characters. I'd like to ask for more content per submission or more frequent submissions?

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Enjoyable but what’s with all the “barking”? Usually you bark an order, so it’s a little distracting when the characters are engaged in a non-confrontational discussion and there’s barking and yipping. Is this a Texan dialect thing?

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

continuing in the "Outstanding " vein

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